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Punchline Hot Seat: Part Six

Part six in an ongoing critique of comics picked at random from participating members. As with before, if I re-write the punchline, I’m not necessarily trying to go funnier. I’m trying to demonstrate construction. I want to show how you re-assembling the logical steps along the progression of your comic can lead to a more polished punchline. It may not seem funnier for your sense of humor. But I’m confident that if you pay attention to the construction, you’ll be able to take away something that works for you.

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by Brad Guigar on April 27, 2011
Posted In: Hot Seat critiques, Writing
└ Tags: Humor
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